Glossary entry

Portuguese term or phrase:

que morava no mais impracticável beco da terra

English translation:

who inhabited the most indecorous alley thereabouts

Added to glossary by Nick Taylor
Jun 17, 2021 14:24
2 yrs ago
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Portuguese term

que morava no mais impracticável beco da terra

Portuguese to English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature In A 19th Century Novel
Context:

Foi Simão Botelho cautelosamente hospedado, e o arreeiro abalou no mesmo ponto para Viseu, com una carta destinada a uma mendiga, que morava no mais impracticável beco da terra.

Muita Obrigada,

Barbara
Change log

Jul 1, 2021 08:40: Nick Taylor Created KOG entry

Discussion

Mark Robertson Jun 18, 2021:
@Nick; thereabouts I like it.
Nick Taylor Jun 18, 2021:
@Barbara Or a little bit different....
who resided in the most uninhabiable alley thereabouts
Mark Robertson Jun 17, 2021:
Na terra Na terra presents a problem. It could mean either on Earth, or in Viseu.
Mark Robertson Jun 17, 2021:
@Barbara Now I understand. Are you seeking to echo/emulate Camilo Castelo Branco's style, which is pretty "elaborado".
Barbara Cochran, MFA (asker) Jun 17, 2021:
Yes, I believe that is just one of many translations of this book. I, of course, am more interested in creating my own.
Mark Robertson Jun 17, 2021:
Amor de Perdição Doomed Love, a translation of Amor de Perdição, by Alice R. Clemente
Publisher ‏ : ‎ Gavea - Brown (January 1, 2000)
Language ‏ : ‎ English
Paperback ‏ : ‎ 165 pages
ISBN-10 ‏ : ‎ 0943722276
ISBN-13 ‏ : ‎ 978-0943722276

Proposed translations

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who inhabited the most indecorous alley thereabouts

...who inhabited the most indecorous alley thereabouts.
Don't really know what style you are looking for, but I think this retains the metre of the original which is, obviously, somewhat archaic and poetic.
Peer comment(s):

agree Mark Robertson : Resided in, instead of inhabited, perhaps?
15 hrs
Cheers Mark, I was juggling with that :-)
agree Bett : good
1 day 29 mins
Thanks Bett
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Selected automatically based on peer agreement."
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Who lived in the least inhabitable alley on Earth.

Usei inhabitable por não permitir viver, mas poderia também ser unpleasant. Depende do resto do contexto.
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who lived in the most godforsaken hellhole...

Perhaps, if we're talking metaphorically.

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Or who lived in the back of beyond.
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who lived in the most ignominious neck of the woods on earth

my take on it
Peer comment(s):

agree Patricia Fierro, M. Sc.
17 mins
Thank you, Patricia!
agree Bett : good
1 day 4 hrs
Thanks, Bett!
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who lived in the most unreasonable ends of the Earth

Suggestion.
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who lived in the most impassable, dingy alley on Earth

Here's some interesting findings:

impracticável: Onde não se pode passar. = INTRANSITÁVEL ≠ TRANSITÁVEL
https://dicionario.priberam.org/impraticável

beco: (1) Rua escura, estreita e curta, e às vezes sem saída. (2) Rua sem saída
https://dicionario.priberam.org/beco

The use of "impracticável" may or may not indicate that it was a dead end, or it could be that the street was too narrow.

The addition of "dingy" reinforces something as being small, insignificant. Clearly, his idea of the place was not very positive!

terra: Planeta habitado pelo homem. (If capitalized, it means "world".)
https://dicionario.priberam.org/terra

Most likely, he means planet Earth, since it's not capitalized.

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Example Sentences

impassable street: https://www.google.com/search?q="impassable street"
impassable alley: https://www.google.com/search?q="impassable alley"

PS: Due to my busy schedule, I won't be able to follow up on upcoming peer comments and/or discussions. The Asker is welcome to contact me (via inbox) if any clarification is needed. Thank you.
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12 days

who dwelled in the least passable alley in the land

impraticável (dicionário priberam): intrasitável https://dicionario.priberam.org/impraticável

na terra = does it mean the country/kingdom, or on earth?
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