il releva le veston au niveau des epaulettes

English translation: he hunched up his shoulders

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French term or phrase:il releva le veston au niveau des epaulettes
English translation:he hunched up his shoulders
Entered by: Yvonne Gallagher

08:42 Apr 2, 2011
French to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Textiles / Clothing / Fashion
French term or phrase: il releva le veston au niveau des epaulettes
A character entering a club cum brothel in 1930s Paris.
McCloosh
Local time: 15:42
he hunched up his shoulders
Explanation:
I would omit jacket/epaulettes as I assume there has already been a description of how he is dressed

Hunching up shoulders is body language for tension/anger/fear/cold etc

more words here might help!

Shoulders hunched up can be a sign that the person is cold (they may be shivering too). Often, this is a sign of tension, often from anxiety or fear. ...

Raised - Curved forward - Pushed back - Circling
changingminds.org/.../body/.../shoulder_body_language.htm - Cached - Similar

He saw Rose Dexter standing outside her place when he drove by, and he hunched up his shoulders and turned his head, hoping she would think he was Searcy. ...
www.scafo.org/library/130105.html - Cached - Similar

But he always walked with his shoulders hunched up and always wore too small shoes. His clothes were also old and shabby, like he had slept with them. ...
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Shoulders hunched up can be a sign that the person is cold (they may be shivering too). Often, this is a sign of tension, often from anxiety or fear
changingminds.org › ... › Parts-of-the-body language - Cached - Similar


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google it with "hunched up shoulders"!

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glad to help
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Yvonne Gallagher
Ireland
Local time: 15:42
Grading comment
Yes, it's the "theatrical" shoulder movement. He does it earlier on "pour se donner un air". Many thanks.
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Summary of answers provided
4 +1he turned up his coat collar
A Word For I (X)
4 +1he hunched up his shoulders
Yvonne Gallagher
3he worked up his shoulders in his jacket
Euqinimod (X)
3lifted up his shoulders (and jacket)
silvester55


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57 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
he turned up his coat collar


Explanation:
This is one way -

In this example the protagonist lifts his coat collar and turns it up to meet the cool (and wet, foggy) weather - a gesture or movement that equally could be transposed to the atmosphere of another sort where the physical movement might have another purpose - to obscure identification. Also seems to fit the 30's heritage Franco-American cross polination of this genre across the decades (e.g. film "Bob le Flambeur").


http://www.freefictionbooks.org/books/l/17037-a-lost-leader-...

A Lost Leader by E. Phillips Oppenheim

Borrowdean shivered a little as he turned up his coat collar

They all came out into the drive to see him start. A curious change had come over the bright spring day. A grey sea-fog had drifted inland, the sunlight was obscured, the larks were silent. Borrowdean shivered a little as he turned up his coat-collar.

"So Nature has her little caprices, even--in paradise!" he remarked.

..."It will blow over in an hour," Mannering said. "A breath of wind, and the whole thing is gone."...



http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bob_le_flambeur

Bob, a middle-aged gambler and ex-con living in the Montmartre district of Paris, experiences a run of bad luck that leaves him nearly broke. Bob is a gentleman with scruples, well-liked in the demi-monde community. He has unsuccessfully tried to rob a bank in the past, and has spent time in prison.

A Word For I (X)
Local time: 07:42
Native speaker of: English

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  writeaway: how do les épaulettes turn into le col?
8 mins
  -> By transfrerence, they are at the same level. Both from shoulder level. Could someone turn up [officer's or officer candidate's] shoulder boards? It's not the "epaulettes", it's the level. + maybe there is some other allusion here (officer - of the Law?)

agree  Yolanda Broad: Sounds like he's trying to keep his face from being seen, doesn't it? Maybe he was hunching his shoulders inside his jacket?
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he worked up his shoulders in his jacket


Explanation:
Une suggestion.

Euqinimod (X)
Local time: 16:42
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench
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lifted up his shoulders (and jacket)


Explanation:
I read your discussion entry , that's why i posted this proposition
He lifted up his shoulders , pour se donner de l'assurance peut etre ?

silvester55
Local time: 17:42
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16 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
he hunched up his shoulders


Explanation:
I would omit jacket/epaulettes as I assume there has already been a description of how he is dressed

Hunching up shoulders is body language for tension/anger/fear/cold etc

more words here might help!

Shoulders hunched up can be a sign that the person is cold (they may be shivering too). Often, this is a sign of tension, often from anxiety or fear. ...

Raised - Curved forward - Pushed back - Circling
changingminds.org/.../body/.../shoulder_body_language.htm - Cached - Similar

He saw Rose Dexter standing outside her place when he drove by, and he hunched up his shoulders and turned his head, hoping she would think he was Searcy. ...
www.scafo.org/library/130105.html - Cached - Similar

But he always walked with his shoulders hunched up and always wore too small shoes. His clothes were also old and shabby, like he had slept with them. ...
www.hotshotdigital.com/artist/nick_drake/biography/ - Cached - Similar


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Note added at 2 days13 hrs (2011-04-04 22:29:35 GMT)
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try this link again
Shoulders hunched up can be a sign that the person is cold (they may be shivering too). Often, this is a sign of tension, often from anxiety or fear
changingminds.org › ... › Parts-of-the-body language - Cached - Similar


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Note added at 2 days13 hrs (2011-04-04 22:30:53 GMT)
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google it with "hunched up shoulders"!

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Note added at 5 days (2011-04-07 19:59:23 GMT) Post-grading
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glad to help

Yvonne Gallagher
Ireland
Local time: 15:42
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Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 101
Grading comment
Yes, it's the "theatrical" shoulder movement. He does it earlier on "pour se donner un air". Many thanks.

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Yolanda Broad
1 day 13 hrs
  -> many thanks Yolanda.
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