Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Russian term or phrase:
предъявляемые требования
English translation:
regulatory requirements
Added to glossary by
David Knowles
Sep 12, 2007 18:32
16 yrs ago
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Russian term
Specialist in Civil Law & Contracts
Native in: English 
Works in: Russian to English, English, Ukrainian to English
о соответствии заключения экспертизы безопасности предъявляемым требованиям
Russian to English
Tech/Engineering
Electronics / Elect Eng
Conformance certificates
По результатам рассмотрения принято решение о соответствии заключения экспертизы промышленной безопасности предъявляемым требованиям и об его утверждении.
Here's my attempt, which is still very heavy: As a result of this review we have taken a decision on the conformity of the expert industrial safety opinion with the requirements and have confirmed it.
What have I missed, and what can I simplify? I'm a bit puzzled by предъявляемым требованиям.
Here's my attempt, which is still very heavy: As a result of this review we have taken a decision on the conformity of the expert industrial safety opinion with the requirements and have confirmed it.
What have I missed, and what can I simplify? I'm a bit puzzled by предъявляемым требованиям.
Proposed translations
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| 4 | see below |
Tetyana Plakuta
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| 4 | ---> |
Igor Blinov
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| 3 | below |
Mark Berelekhis
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| 2 | -> |
Nik-On/Off
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Change log
Sep 13, 2007 07:54: David Knowles Created KOG entry
Proposed translations
2 hrs
Tetyana Plakuta
United States
United States
Native in Russian
United States
Translating Power
Native in: Russian
Works in: English to Ukrainian, Ukrainian to English
Related KudoZ points
:
4
Selected
see below
As a result of this discussion, we have decided that the assessment report on industrial safety conditions complies with regulatory requirements and therefore approved it.
It sounds like a meeting report, so there was a discussion (рассмотрение = обсуждение), the grammar of the sentence insists that it was the paper that was complying with the certain requirements, however with Russian gobbledegook you can never be sure the author him/herself understands what he/she is trying to say.
It sounds like a meeting report, so there was a discussion (рассмотрение = обсуждение), the grammar of the sentence insists that it was the paper that was complying with the certain requirements, however with Russian gobbledegook you can never be sure the author him/herself understands what he/she is trying to say.
Example sentence:
submit a written report that conforms to the guidelines
Study Reports will comply with the ICH, FDA and EMEA regulatory requirements
Reference:
http://www.drugdevelopment-technology.com/contractors/contract_research/neurofit/press5.html
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thank you very much Tetyana - this answer makes the most sense of the gobbledegook!"
19 mins
Nik-On/Off
Ukraine
Ukraine
Native in Russian
Works in field
Ukraine
careful, caring, and perfectionist
Native in: Russian 
, Ukrainian
Works in: English to Russian, Russian to English, Ukrainian to English, and 1 more.
Related KudoZ points
:
150
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As a result of this review, we have confirmed the compliance of the expert industrial safety opinion with the safety requirements and have decided to approve it.
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Note added at 24 mins (2007-09-12 18:57:41 GMT)
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confirmed that ... is compliant with
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Note added at 24 mins (2007-09-12 18:57:41 GMT)
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confirmed that ... is compliant with
23 mins
Mark Berelekhis
United States
United States
Native in Russian
&
English
United States
Exemplary quality, truly bilingual
Native in: Russian , English
Works in: Russian to English, English to Russian, English
Related KudoZ points
:
4
below
... we have decided and confirmed that the expert opinion conforms to the required industrial safety conditions.
This is as much as I dare to change it. The Russian is extremely awkward, and I'm vary of inadvertently changing the meaning while making the English readable.
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Note added at 2 hrs (2007-09-12 20:43:17 GMT)
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Okay, let's try this then:
... we have decided and confirmed that the expert opinion regarding industrial safety conditions meets/satisfies the required demands.
I think that it's actually a bit better than my 1st attempt. Besides for 'заключение экспертизы промышленной безопасности' staying together.
This is as much as I dare to change it. The Russian is extremely awkward, and I'm vary of inadvertently changing the meaning while making the English readable.
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Note added at 2 hrs (2007-09-12 20:43:17 GMT)
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Okay, let's try this then:
... we have decided and confirmed that the expert opinion regarding industrial safety conditions meets/satisfies the required demands.
I think that it's actually a bit better than my 1st attempt. Besides for 'заключение экспертизы промышленной безопасности' staying together.
Note from asker:
| I'm glad you agree that the Russian is extremely awkward! It looks like a standard paragraph, so it ought to be comprehensible. |
| заключение экспертизы промышленной безопасности has to stay together, because it occurs elsewhere. |
10 hrs
Igor Blinov
Russian Federation
Russian Federation
Native in Russian
Specializes in field
Russian Federation
Precision Powered by Knowledge
Native in: Russian
Works in: English to Russian, Russian to English
Related KudoZ points
:
251
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I read this as follows:
As a result of this review the meeting (Comission, etc. whatever fits in) decided that the Conclusion of Industrial Safety Expertise/Inspection conforms with the established requirements (i.e. Norms&Standards) and voted to approve it
As a result of this review the meeting (Comission, etc. whatever fits in) decided that the Conclusion of Industrial Safety Expertise/Inspection conforms with the established requirements (i.e. Norms&Standards) and voted to approve it
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