to flame out

English translation: blaze out

12:53 Aug 14, 2007
English language (monolingual) [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature
English term or phrase: to flame out
God's Grandeur by G.M. Hopkins

The world is charged with the grandeur of God.
It will flame out, like shining from shook foil;
It gathers to a greatness, like the ooze of oil
Crushed. Why do men then now not reck his rod?
Generations have trod, have trod, have trod;
And all is seared with trade; bleared, smeared with toil;
And wears man's smudge |&| shares man's smell: the soil
Is bare now, nor can foot feel, being shod.

And for all this, nature is never spent;
There lives the dearest freshness deep down things;
And though the last lights off the black West went
Oh, morning, at the brown brink eastward, springs -
Because the Holy Ghost over the bent
World broods with warm breast and with ah! bright wings.


I have been reading a lot of pages about Hopkins and/or this poem, found two opposite meanings of "flame out" and cannot decide which one is correct :
1) to catch fire, to blaze
2) to extinguish, to disappear

What do you think?
Stéphanie Soudais
France
Local time: 05:50
Selected answer:blaze out
Explanation:
I always thought it meant (in this poem) that the grandeur of God blazed out like the light from foil when it is shaken.
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Cervin
United Kingdom
Local time: 04:50
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Thank you all!
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SUMMARY OF ALL EXPLANATIONS PROVIDED
3 +3blaze out
Cervin
4 +1to flare forth (shine with sudden light)
Refugio
4become so bright that no ...
Charlesp


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blaze out


Explanation:
I always thought it meant (in this poem) that the grandeur of God blazed out like the light from foil when it is shaken.

Cervin
United Kingdom
Local time: 04:50
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Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 4
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Thank you all!

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Christopher Peterson: I was going to write the same thing.
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agree  Elena Aleksandrova
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agree  Alfa Trans (X)
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16 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
to flare forth (shine with sudden light)


Explanation:
I don't think the pronoun "it" refers to the world, but rather to God's grandeur, the nearest antecedent. (God, of course, would not be "it".) If so, then the meaning is clear: it will flame out, as solar flares do, not burn out.

Refugio
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agree  William [Bill] Gray
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become so bright that no ...


Explanation:
become so bright that no human can survive the brightness, the light

Charlesp
Sweden
Local time: 05:50
Native speaker of: English
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