Sep 30, 2006 06:26
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What do you do? Do you primarily work on;

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Is the second sentence correct? Is "on" redundant here? Or is this sentence incomplete? Please suggest.

Discussion

Can Altinbay Sep 30, 2006:
I would have added the comment Suzan made had she not made it.
Suzan Hamer Sep 30, 2006:
Perhaps the semi-colon is supposed to be a colon and thereafter follows a list of jobs, tasks, or subjects that the reader is supposed to choose one or more answers from?
Sanjiv Sadan (X) (asker) Sep 30, 2006:
Certainly. I'll apprise you of their reply.
Joe L Sep 30, 2006:
Thanks. Let us know what they tell you, and then we'll take it from there.
Because, as it is, it's simply an incomplete sentence.
Sanjiv Sadan (X) (asker) Sep 30, 2006:
Yes, the sentence ends with that semicolon It sounds somewhat unusual, vague, ambiguous and incorrect. That is why, I am seeking the opinion of the native speakers. I have already written to the agency to check it with the end client.
Joe L Sep 30, 2006:
Does your sentence end with that semicolon, or is there
more which you omitted?
Thanks.

Responses

+2
15 mins
Selected

Definitely incomplete sentence

The semicolon indicates that something then follows.
Plus, an object is required after the prepostion "on".
No sentence would just end this way.

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Note added at 24 mins (2006-09-30 06:50:44 GMT)
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Are you able to inquire about what might have been cut off from
this sentence? Something certainly is missing, UNLESS this is
part of a dialogue. Is this part of a dialogue where a speaker gets
cut off in mid-sentence, then your text is plausible, as is.
Hope this helps!

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Note added at 25 mins (2006-09-30 06:52:21 GMT)
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Correction: "Is this part of..." >>> "IF this is part of..."
Peer comment(s):

agree David Moore (X) : Definitely incomplete - should in any case be terminated by a colon, if something follows, and NOT a semi-colon...
1 day 6 hrs
Thank you, David! And your point is entirely correct.
agree Alfa Trans (X)
8 days
Thanks!!!
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Thanks to both of you. The client has informed that there is colon in place of semi colon, which caused the confusion."
+3
13 mins

choice of preposition depends

do you primarily work on insurance claims?
or do you primarily work with medical reimbursements?
or...work in IT (information technology)?
or....work in cooperation with the HR department?
or .....work over at the new building?
Note from asker:
Thanks for your answer but my question is if this sentence is complete. I am not asking about the prepositions. Does not it sound ambiguous?
Peer comment(s):

agree niczav
4 mins
thanks, niczav !
agree Fan Gao : I agree and we'd have to see the rest of the sentence to know exactly which preposition fits best.
9 mins
thanks Chinese Concept !
agree Jack Doughty : or work to rule; or work by the book...
11 mins
Hi Jack :-)
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