13:06 Jun 4, 2011 |
English language (monolingual) [PRO] Social Sciences - Human Resources | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Jack Doughty United Kingdom Local time: 10:57 | ||||||
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the older enterpreneur is an important, if not well understood, phenomenon. There is an important phenomenon of older people becoming entrepreneurs (see below) Explanation: "There is an important phenomenon of older people becoming entrepreneurs, but in spite of being important, this phenomenon is not well understood." I have tried to rephrase it so as to make the meaning clearer. |
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the older enterpreneur is an important, if not well understood, phenomenon. Older entrepreneurs form an important though not well understood... Explanation: ....part of (employment or unemployment statistics, or whatever else best fits your context). |
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