Apr 26, 2007 23:37
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Poland
is this sentence correct?
English
Bus/Financial
Business/Commerce (general)
Shared mindset
- To what extent does our organization have a culture or identity that reflects what we stand for and how we work that is shared by both customers and employees?
Accountability
- ***To what extent are we able to ensure execution though a mindset that high performance matters here?***
These questions appear in a audit concerning organizational capabilities. I have problems figuring out the structure of the second one.
- To what extent does our organization have a culture or identity that reflects what we stand for and how we work that is shared by both customers and employees?
Accountability
- ***To what extent are we able to ensure execution though a mindset that high performance matters here?***
These questions appear in a audit concerning organizational capabilities. I have problems figuring out the structure of the second one.
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through an approach that values strong performance in this context
the original sentence is a bit awkward
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Andy Watkinson
: The most English sounding paraphrase (though I might have omitted "in this context".
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Vicky Papaprodromou
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thank you :o)"
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Mikhail Kropotov
Germany
Germany
Specializes in field
Germany
US-educated, precise & thorough
Native in: Russian
Works in: English to Russian, Russian to English, Russian
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through the mindset which stipulates that high performance matters here
That's one way of disecting that critter
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Cagdas Karatas
: you know the grammar rule "hidden should" with such sentences, I am sure.
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Sorry but that doesn't make sense. Performance is a singular noun.
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Peter Shortall
: Or "a mindset according to which", though it's "dissecting" :P
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RHELLER
: it's definitely an awkward sentence
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Jack Doughty
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Alfa Trans (X)
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Alexandra Tussing
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Alexander Demyanov
Works in field
Software Engineering background
Native in: Russian 
Works in: English, Russian, Russian to English, and 1 more.
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The meaning
To what extent our mindset reflects that performance is what matters, so as to help us ensure execution of whatever we do with excellent performance and results?
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th(r)ough
I guess a letter is missing
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Note added at 52 dakika (2007-04-27 00:30:44 GMT)
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The meaning: Now that performance does matter in our organisation, how much are we capable of perfoming the execution in here?
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Note added at 52 dakika (2007-04-27 00:30:44 GMT)
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The meaning: Now that performance does matter in our organisation, how much are we capable of perfoming the execution in here?
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Peter Shortall
: Well spotted, I hadn't noticed an "r" was missing!
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thanks peter!
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RHELLER
: yes, that probably confused her
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thanks rita!
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Andy Watkinson
: "Now that performance does matter in our organisation" = "Until now, it didn't matter much.".... An unlikely statement, to say the least.// "Handsome"? Me?...You're joking, n'est-ce pas?
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thanks, learning English // handsome now? :D
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TrueBaller
: You got it! You need to work on your confidence... Cheers! M.
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thanks mimoza!
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***To what extent are we able to ensure execution though a mindset that high performance matters her
***To what extent are we able to achieve a mindset that high performance matters here, an essential ingredient for implementation?***
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ErichEko ⟹⭐
Indonesia
Indonesia
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Indonesia
Legal, Marketing, Biz, Software, Games
Native in: Indonesian (Variant: Standard-Indonesia) 
Works in: English to Indonesian, Indonesian to English
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by instilling a mindset
I think the author wants to question how successful the organization will be in establishing or enforcing ("execution") accountability when a mindset that values high performance is instilled in everyone's -- what else -- mind. :)
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Note added at 6 hrs (2007-04-27 06:32:54 GMT)
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"To what extent are we able to ensure execution by instilling a mindset that high performance matters?"
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Note added at 6 hrs (2007-04-27 06:32:54 GMT)
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"To what extent are we able to ensure execution by instilling a mindset that high performance matters?"
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