Sep 28, 2018 14:58
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सभी के लिए उज्ज्वल भविष्य

Saying that all should have a nice future. Brighter future, better prospects.
Example sentence:

हम सभी के लिए उज्ज्वल भविष्य की कामना करते हैं।

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agree Atiquzzama Khan
1 min
agree Ravi sahay
5 mins
agree Kausar Saiyed (X)
1 hr
agree Ravindra Godbole
11 hrs
agree Parvathi Pappu
2 days 19 hrs
agree Mahtab Alam : सब के लिए एक उज्जवल भविष्य
18 days
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सभी के लिए अधिक उज्जवल भविष्य

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agree Nitin Goyal
1 min
Thansks Nitinji!
agree Kunal Jaidka
2 mins
Thansks Kunalji!
neutral Atiquzzama Khan : अधिक की आवश्यकता नहीं थी।
5 mins
How will you justify "Brighter", It is not Bright? In a marketing text, you are betting for Better than the competitors...
agree Rajan Chopra
8 hrs
Thanks Choprji
disagree alagoudar07 : if brighter is translated as अधिक उज्जवल it will be like word to word translation, It has to be something like अत्युत्तम या उन्नत words can be used
15 hrs
And what difference does your suggestion makes, apart from being a cosmetic suggestion? I disagree with your logic and thanks.
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8 mins

सभी के लिए शानदार भविष्य

The word शानदार include every aspect of brightness, positive and strong aspect of something.
Example sentence:

सभी के लिए शानदार भविष्य का एक बेहतर प्रयास

सभी के लिए शानदार भविष्य का एक सपना

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agree alagoudar07 : सभी के लिए बहतर अवसर
15 hrs
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1 day 11 hrs

सुनहरा भविष्य – सभी के लिए

Hi George,

The translation am tendering is based on the contextual perspective, keeping in mind that this is part of an advert, but not part of a sentence or a paragraph. Moreover, this is a standalone sentence.

Additionally, the client is shunning the 'articles' and the same shall be reflected in Hindi.

This contextual translation when reverse-translated (verbatim) would mean "Golden future for all". Incidentally, the word "Golden future" is prevalently used in the popular culture to denote the forward-looking wish/statement 'better prospects in the future."

सुनहरा भविष्य – सभी के लिए [ Golden prospects – for everyone]. In this version the, anticipated, end-result i.e. the Golden Future is placed first. This is done keeping the fact in perspective that this is a 'Tagline' and not a sentence per se.

सभी के लिए सुनहरा भविष्य, this version presents the text in a sentence form. Reckon, from the advert perspective the earlier one shall be appropriate.

Best,

Sanjeev Dhadwal.
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Peer comment(s):

agree Balvir Chand
6 hrs
Balbir Ji! Thanks! for the efforts and time invested in registering the response. Best .
agree Ashutosh Mitra
7 hrs
Ashutosh Ji! The agreement on the 'context' is humbly appreciated, Thanks. Best.
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1 day 6 hrs

सभी के लिए उज्जवल भविष्य / सभी का उज्जवल भविष्य

उज्जवल भविष्य means bright future. As the sayer/author is wishing for bright future to all, so the brighter word is used. 'Brighter' word used in a sense, that all will have more bright future than present. Means they are doing well in present. Brighter word has hidden comparison.

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Note added at 3 days 8 hrs (2018-10-01 23:17:34 GMT) Post-grading
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As the sentence is not complete so it is difficult to get its sense. Sense of sentence will come by what is around that sentence.
I don't know what is underneath of this tagline or it is just like a slogan.
If there are some paragraph, which show relation to this tagline. One suggestion can be this also.

सभी के उज्जवल भविष्य के लिए:
But 'for' is not used before brighter. But it can also be one suggestion.
Example sentence:

सभी के लिए उज्जवल भविष्य की कामना करता हूँ।

सभी का उज्जवल भविष्य होगा/हो

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18 days

उज्ज्वल भविष्य हर किसी के लिए

Above Tagline is targeting every gender, age & culture.
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